Thursday, February 19, 2009

His or Hen's


An exercise for Kris Pearn's storyboarding course at Schoolism dot com.  I'm including the script in case some of the story points turn out vague. Any ideas how to improve?




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4 comments:

Tobias Schwarz said...

very nice!

11:20 PM, February 19, 2009
Anonymous said...

awsome!!
great work ((:

10:10 AM, February 20, 2009
Talia Tsur said...

Very nice and clear! sweet drawings too.
The only thing I was a bit confused with is it looks like a 180 flip between 9.3 and 10.1 but maybe its just me...
it would be cool to read the feedback you got from your mentor too. Keep updating please :)

11:35 PM, February 22, 2009
Doron Meir said...

Thanks Tobias and princessa! Much appreciated.

Talia: yes, I'm crossing the 180 line there - that's deliberate. I think the egg holds the cut together- that's the theory, at least. Part of the exercise was how to cross the 180 line without confusing the audience. Thanks for the kind words and I'll definitely keep updating :)

1:15 AM, February 23, 2009

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